finish off the story...

[zahra]

salams...
okay....lol....iv adopted manars idea..for imaginative story writing......except wer gonna modify it slightly..lol...
okay..so here the story's gotta be in english...
no more than 50 words...
and lets make it mysterious..lol..lets b imaginative!!!
ahaha..lol...
ill start....:flex:..lol

the birds whistled and rustled the browning leaves outside my window.i could here them sing. i could smell the sweet corn ng in the oven downstairs. i could feel the cool breeze brushing my cheek.all my senses were strong and awake, but for my eyes, i could not see.......

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[zahra]

okay..lol..heres a change to the changed rules...ahahha..lol..as proposed by a special friend..not mentioning ani names(manar) ahahaha..lol...50 words is slightly too much..lol..i guess i boarded the boat and am rowing too fast..lol...so were gonna keep it 15 words...same as the arabic story thing...yah??
lol
sorri bout that ppl!!!
ahahhaha
:post-45373-12092870

[منار]

you are so sweet and imbaressed moi
:unsure::unsure::unsure:

so,..erm,..eh,.e7em e7em,..where do we finish off
:003:

[zahra]

ummm..how about we have a completely different start??!!
lolies
here goes:

It was a dark and stormy night, one that could change a person's life forever.

lets see some imagination!....
:ggg:

[منار]

It was a dark and stormy night, one that could change a person's life forever.


my weak helpless body laid on the wooden cold creaking floor of the basement

I sense horror in this story zahoor,...loooooooooool

[zahra]

it was a dark and stormy night, one that could change a person's life forever. my weak helpless body laid on the wooden, cold, creaking floor of the basement. the thunder rattled the windows as danger lurked outside..how could a night so sweet turn so bitterly sour...

horror...oOOoo....lollies...lets hope so..i love horror stories...:P

[~غدير~]

it was a dark and stormy night, one that could change a person's life forever. my weak helpless body laid on the wooden, cold, creaking floor of the basement. the thunder rattled the windows as danger lurked outside..how could a night so sweet turn so bitterly sour...

my window cracked from the heavy rains and water started dripping slowly yet loudly

[منار]

it was a dark and stormy night, one that could change a person's life forever. my weak helpless body laid on the wooden, cold, creaking floor of the basement. the thunder rattled the windows as danger lurked outside..how could a night so sweet turn so bitterly sour...

my window cracked from the heavy rains and water started
dripping slowly yet loudly

the darkness filled the place ,my sight was blury hence tried to figure out the place with every thunders lightning

[zahra]

it was a dark and stormy night, one that could change a person's life forever. my weak helpless body laid on the wooden, cold, creaking floor of the basement. the thunder rattled the windows as danger lurked outside..how could a night so sweet turn so bitterly sour...

my window cracked from the heavy rains and water started
dripping slowly yet loudly

the darkness filled the place ,my sight was blury hence tried to figure out the place with every thunders lightning
the stairs creaked and the door banged open.... i saw a shadow heading my way

...

[منار]

sensation of fear and hope filled me,..I feared the intentions of this comer and yet hoped its the rescue I've been longing for

:thumbup:yallah shabab farjoone ilibda3 3enee

[~غدير~]

shoo hal lahje ya manar, sayra shameya khayteee
to2brene me a7lake
yeeeeeeeeeeeeee shoo bede eshrab maeeeeee

hahaha


The shadow got closer and bigger, my heart started beating faster and faster as I reached the state of denial

[منار]

shoo hal lahje ya manar, sayra shameya khayteee
to2brene me a7lake
yeeeeeeeeeeeeee shoo bede eshrab maeeeeee


:blush::blush::blush:

me no finish de stowy
me vewy shy and sowy

:blush:

[~غدير~]

هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


AMOOT 3ALA RABECH WALLAH

:3095:

please 7ayate bedek etkamle ya3ne bedek etkamle, shoo eltee? hehe

[منار]

The shadow got closer and bigger, my heart started beating faster and faster as I reached the state of denial

sudenly I felt the closeness of this body against me ,...gently a warm hand touched my forehead

:71_asmilies-com:

[nebras]

sensation of fear and hope filled me,..I feared the intentions of this comer and yet hoped its the rescue I've been longing forI struggled to lift my weighty eye lids to take a glimpse of the shining figure above me, I prayed. Oh Allah, help me see, help me. I gathered the little strength and energy I had and finally looked up…The shinning light of this figure almost blinded me; But who was he?

[nebras]

sensation of fear and hope filled me,..I feared the intentions of this comer and yet hoped its the rescue I've been longing for

I struggled to lift my weighty eye lids to take a glimpse of the shining figure above me, I prayed. Oh Allah, help me see, help me. I gathered the little strength and energy I had and finally looked up…The shinning light of this figure almost blinded me; But who was he?

[منار]

nebras plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz not a 100 letter post
u will be banned if u did this again:BoomSmilie_anim:,..hahah only kidding
:shiny:so lets resume

sensation of fear and hope filled me,..I feared the intentions of this comer and yet hoped its the rescue I've been longing for

I struggled to lift my weighty eye lids to take a glimpse of the shining figure above me, I prayed. Oh Allah, help me see, help me. I gathered the little strength and energy I had and finally looked up…The shinning light of this figure almost blinded me; But who was he?

omg,... thought I might be wrong,..but no its him its him its my long lost FATHER

[zahra]

is it him? could it really be him? i reached out a hand and drew it back quickly.....what if i was mistake? what if it isn't him??

[منار]

but then without doubt,..i reached towards him,...he pulled me hard and said Ali wake up!! we are leaving the camp and u r still asleep,...looooOOOOOOooool I changed the story sorry haha

[zahra]

ahahahhaah..wleeeh !! manuur!!ahahhaa
lollies..nw habibz..:P




but then without doubt,..i reached towards him,...he pulled me hard and said Ali wake up!! we are leaving the camp and u r still asleep....

"ALI Ali, everyone is waiting for us in the caravan! ALI wake up"...and then i heard a deafening noise, like that of an explosion....and everything turned black....


hahahah..lol...what a turnover..:P
im determined to not let this finish off so easily..lollies..lets c hu is gonna help me out..:P
:3095:

[منار]

"...and then i heard a deafening noise, like that of an explosion....and everything turned black....

i could barely open my eyes from the sand i the air
I saw people running and screaming,..i too was running with them for safety

[zahra]

the sound of screaming filled my head. what do i do? where can i go?where is my family?????

[منار]

suddenly I tripped over and fell in a big deep whole that was hidden under the ashes

اويلي قلبت لكم القصة هههههههههههههههههه
تعالوا طلعوا للرجال خخخخخخخخ

.

[zahra]

suddenly I tripped over and fell in a big deep hole that was hidden under the ashes

i was in the dark...alone...i had no one but god to ask for help..today's events pushed me on to my knees, and i prayed to allah, to help me...my family and friends were scattered, and allah alone could help us...i felt the tears pour out of my eyes as i prayed and asked for the lords help......

[zahra]

"oh, allah...WHERE are you? "...i need you, Oh, allah.....
through my tears and cries, i heard a voice from within...."u call at times of adversity, yet do u remmeber allah at times of prosperity?"

[منار]

i was so ashamed of myself and coudlnt help sobbing at my devistating state

[Amina95]

wer r u guyz, man get the guy outt//!
or is he meant to rot & die in the whole ;S

i was so ashamed of myself and coudlnt help sobbing at my devistating state

''after waiting and muttering prayers.. for what seemed like hours..
i suddenly felt something scratching up above. followed closely by a loud bark..''

i kno what happens next.. waitin for ur opinion of the rest of da story....?
:)
great thread btw ;)

[Dr_AbuTurab]

Does story need to make sense or I can just go on my rant parade
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[منار]

:4:bring it on brother